Tuesday, 26 February 2013

puisi satu baris #2

Rasanya ingin aku menyelip diantara ribuan debu yang melambai


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Batam,26 feb 2013

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19 comments:

  1. Lidya Fitrian26 February 2013 at 11:45

    aku ikutan nyelip juga deh :)

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    1. HM Zwan27 February 2013 at 11:43

      boleh boleh mbk,,masih muat ouyyy hahaha

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    2. HM Zwan27 February 2013 at 11:45

      bisa bisaaaa....masih muat ouyyyy hihihi

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  2. Vanisa Desfriani26 February 2013 at 16:35

    ikutan nyelipin komentar :)

    salam kenal bun^

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  3. Alaika Abdullah26 February 2013 at 22:12

    baru tau ada puisi satu baris mba... :)

    sini aku tambahkan satu yaaa...

    ... dan berselonjor di antara tumpukan dedaun yang jatuh dan mulai mengering...
    hehe

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    1. HM Zwan27 February 2013 at 18:23

      Iki ide tmn yg suka fiksi mbk al...
      E e...ikut selonjorsn ah xixi

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  4. Al-Hikmah Bokoran27 February 2013 at 03:33

    Nice

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  5. marsudiyanto27 February 2013 at 05:29

    Gara2 ada yang menyelip, maka debu itu nggak cuma ribuan tapi puluhan ribu

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    1. HM Zwan27 February 2013 at 18:24

      Hehe....pak mars byk bgtttt,bisa krg g???xixi

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  6. dey27 February 2013 at 09:00

    lalu terbang berputar mengelilingi awan, hehe

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  7. Santi Dewi27 February 2013 at 11:02

    Kelilipan dong......... hehehhe.... nice poem

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  8. Belajar Photoshop27 February 2013 at 11:40

    hueheheh.. bener kata kang marsudiyanto tu.. tar malah jadi kotor lagi.. sapuin dulu iia :p

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  9. Una3 March 2013 at 10:06

    Asal gak nyelip di gigi aja deh,
    gak enak hihi :D

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  10. Kinzihana3 March 2013 at 20:22

    tp kerenn walau sebaris

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